Changes after hot desking

Before                                                                                                        After

I have got some nice feedback on my contents page, the only one thing my audience did not like was folios being on different sides. So what I changed was mostly just organised all the folios on one side. They still do not look very even on the side, but it is in working process.

Before                                                                                                        After 

I also got some nice feedback on my front cover, but audience did not like the gap on the left side next to his head, which I have fixed moving topics a bit up and changing places so text would not blend into his arm.

The next thing was the box, but just minority said that they do not like it. I made it slightly darker and more see-through also moved it a bit down. I changed the colour of the elipse as well to a bit darker, not that attention seeking grey colour.